I forgot to post a feedback thread -- that's what I get for posting late at night!

I won't do a regular thread for every part, since I think there are likely to be fewer readers over here. So, at any point you want to leave feedback, please post here!

Thanks for reading!

Well, I enjoyed it greatly. The writing style drew me in fairly easily and most importantly of all, for this reader, the dialogue flowed well, wasn't stilted or made me wince. It all sounded perfectly authentic. In fact, I'd say not only should you continue, but you should see if you can't get it published once it's done.

LabRat

Thanks, Labby!! Your post made my day!! I'm off to post part two...

Happy reading!