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 Loving it...
If she had to move heaven and Earth, perhaps come back to haunt Perry and explain the story after they'd killed her, she would do it.
Waking a Miracle by Aria
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Janet This is excellent.  Tricia 
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Love, love the turns of phrase you use in here, Janet! Loved this bit, too: And *he* spent a lot of *his* time tucking his foot under a chair rung, or the edge of his coffee table, to keep from floating.
Or stumbling in the newsroom, or shifting around in his chair, or holding onto doorknobs to conceal his… lightness of being.
Lois probably thought he had weak ankles.
Or a terrible sense of balance.
And he’d had to reshape a couple of the Daily Planet’s doorknobs after leaving finger indentations in them.  Wonderful stuff! Wendy 
Just a fly-by! *waves*
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Now that I'm caught up--great job so far. I love how you add little touches to all the familiar scenes. Feeling like he’d just slipped the safety back on the gun, he quietly left the room. I like this!
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Swoosh --->
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Hi, Cute! 
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
MAF
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This is a great story so far...very unique!
Spike: "There's a hole in the world...feels like we ought to have known."
-Angel
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Thank you all for your encouraging comments - I'm glad you like the story so far.
I'm sorry I haven't replied to your comments sooner - I've had wireless connection issues that limited the window in which I could post. All better now, though.
I've had fun writing this, and have found as I go along that there are many more opportunities for turning poor Clark's little problem into comedy than I originally anticipated.
~Toc
TicAndToc :o)
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"I have six locks on my door all in a row. When I go out, I lock every other one. I figure no matter how long somebody stands there picking the locks, they are always locking three."
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I like it.
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