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 DONE I hope you liked it!!! ~NICOLE
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First to reply! This really beats out reading about Ancient Greece here in my dorm!  Well done and just a very nice way to end it. Waffy all the way!   ~Lois Lane Wanna Be
"Live with intention.
Walk to the edge.
Listen Hard.
Practice wellness.
Play with abandon.
Laugh.
Choose with no regret.
Continue to learn.
Appreciate your friends.
Do what you love.
Live as if this is all there is."
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Nice!!! Very WAFFy ending. And you know, I must be out of practice at fanfic-reading or something, because when Clark spoke up to stop the wedding, I couldn't figure out why he'd done it -- I'd totally forgotten he had super-hearing  I guess I was just very deeply into Lois's POV, and since she doesn't know that... I didn't either. Or something. Great job, Nicole -- thanks for sharing! PJ
"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."
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WAFFy, WAFFy, WAFFy...  Great ending to a great story!  Andreia
"My wife's love is what unites Krypton and Earth in my heart. Without it, without her, I truly would be in hell."
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Nicole, I've been really really really terrible about commenting  but I wanted to let you know that I've been following this story and I absolutely love it! Congratulations on this story - I thoroughly enjoyed it!  Sara
Death: Easy, Bill. You'll give yourself a heart attack and ruin my vacation.
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Hi, Love this story.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
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I loved this story. Clark speaking up, doing the saving...so romantic!  Great job! I love reading your stories.  ~Kristen
Joey: If he doesn't like you, then this is all just a moo point.
Rachel: A moo point?
Joey: Yeah, it's like a cow's opinion, you know, it just doesn't matter. It's "moo."
Rachel: Have I been living with him for too long, or did that all just make sense?
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Loved this story! Sorry for the long delayed feedback, I have so little time to comment, but I try to read as many stories as I can, and yours is so moving! simona
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Girl that was awesome! Too many times I thought I felt Lois' and Clark's pain physically. Another well done project! 
I'm a firm believer in the fact that God doesn't put any more on us than we can bear. He does however make us come to Jesus every so often.
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Great!!!! I really enjoyed how you included Rachel and put a new a twist on the episodes. Great job!!! 
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Great ending - so sweet! Susan
You can find my stories as Groobie on the nfic archives and Susan Young on the gfic archives. In other words, you know me as Groobie.
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Very WAFFy!!! I loved it! Clark's really one of a kind!!! Can't help but love him!  Hope to read more of your stories soon!!!!
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Nicole I love the ending. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Tricia 
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AWWWWWWW! Sappy Sigh! Loved it. Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
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Yes! All is right with the world!
The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched they must be felt with the heart
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Wonderful, Nicole! I really liked this story, and I liked how Lois ultimately got out of the wedding with Clark’s help. That was such a neat touch – Lex risking that others would also see his “true nature” if Lois chose to make a public fuss. He was taking quite a gamble, because even with all her support -- the Planet, her friends, Clark – supposedly removed, she is still Lois Lane and could have so easily made a scene. And having Clark hear her whispers, and having him speak up at the exact right moment… brilliant!! I think my favorite line is Rachel’s, when she and Lois are talking and she tells Lois how much she enjoyed the… non-wedding, I guess you’d call it, because it was so exiting, and that in Smallville you just forever held your peace. ~Toc
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Absolutely wonderful! Loved how you used the "You are a strange one.." quote.
If she had to move heaven and Earth, perhaps come back to haunt Perry and explain the story after they'd killed her, she would do it.
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Ditto everyone else here, Nicole - this was a lovely finish. Really WAFFy after all the emotional pain, and giving us lots of hope for Lois and Clark's future. When Lois and Lex started whispering to each other, I was just waiting for a sign that Clark had heard. And you used that just perfectly! I love the way he stepped between her and Lex. Always her hero, whether or not he's in the Suit! And that final scene... just lovely.  More from you soon, I hope! Wendy
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Wow... thank you everyone for all the comments!!!! I really enjoyed writing this; so to have such positive feedback... it's very appreciated! I'm hoping that I am now forgiven for breaking the last part up into two parts, making you wait an extra day?? Thanks again!!! 
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Hi Nicole, you did a great job on this story. I felt the pain that Clark was going through,it seems so real. I loved it!!!!! Is there a possibility there might be a sequel? Seme
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