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  .... too... much.... coffee....  hope you like part 9!!! ~NICOLE
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LOIS IS PREGNANT?!?!? WHAT?!? My god, this story is getting better every second...hmmm...will Lois come to the same realization as Clark?
Wow...what a great story...keep posting!!!
Lola
"We're both barefoot, both flushed, and we both look guilty as hell. Clark has finger-combed his hair but I'm positive mine looks like I was just f… fished out of the river."
<3 this fic!
'The Next Step' By Sue S.
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Crap! What the heck did I miss, I have to go back and read it again. When did she get pregnant? Oy! More soon. Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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Hi, Great part.  Love this part. That voice, though… it shook Lois to the core. She hadn’t overheard anyone; that much she knew. And she’d known, the moment she had instinctively answered Perry, that it had not been Perry’s voice.
It had been Clark’s.
She knew it.
His voice was in her head.
Ever since his death, his voice had been in her head constantly. She could remember exactly what it sounded like and thought of it often, never wanting to forget.  She can hear Clark they are connected. “What is it?” Lois asked, using every fiber in her body to restrain herself from grabbing the woman’s neck.
Dr. Morgan’s smile grew wider. “Why, you’re pregnant,” she said. I’m in shock!! He started to tremble as it all came back.
In the recurring ‘dream’ he had every night after that night, he had been lying there, darkness all around. He had reached instinctively for her, knowing, somehow, even in his sleepy state, she would be there, and she had come to him and rested in his arms. And then she’d whimpered and said his name.
And they’d kissed. OMG! He remembers.  Does Lois remember being with Clark?  I hope she put two and two together. More ASAP, please. MAF
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
MAF
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Yep, I thought so! Woohoo this is awesome, keep it coming!! 
"A hero is an ordinary individual who finds the strength to persevere and endure in spite of overwhelming obstacles." Chris Reeve
"Whatever comes our way, whatever battle we have raging inside us, we always have a choice. It's the choices that make us who we are, and we can always choose to do what's right." Peter Parker
DON'T DOUBT THE ROUTH
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Very engaging story so far...keep it coming! Susan
You can find my stories as Groobie on the nfic archives and Susan Young on the gfic archives. In other words, you know me as Groobie.
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Columnist
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I cheated and had a glance at the feedback folder before I read this part. I saw the big "Lois is Pregnant" thing and racked my brain trying to figure out just how that happened. It all clicked as soon as it clicked for Clark. That realization was one huge . I can not believe this story. It gets better and better with every post! Well, this new development could be a really good thing as far as the anger issue goes. Maybe it will help cushion the blow and she'll get over it just a tad faster. But I still think Clark should run and hide...or do this >  when he has to face the music. But anyway, a baby?!?! Yay!!! Can we expect the next part sometime tomorrow??? Please??? ~Kristen
Joey: If he doesn't like you, then this is all just a moo point.
Rachel: A moo point?
Joey: Yeah, it's like a cow's opinion, you know, it just doesn't matter. It's "moo."
Rachel: Have I been living with him for too long, or did that all just make sense?
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Hi, all Thanks for the feedback! Made my morning!! And THANK YOU for the faith in where the story is going. I'll admit, I was worried... throwing such a plot twist in... and I can only beg you to stick with me through the rest!!  I think it'll be worth your while Can we expect the next part sometime tomorrow??? Please??? Well when you ask so nicely...  ... it'll be up later today!! Thanks again!!
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Lois is pregnant. Damn. I was hoping she had the flu.
"I'm red-eyed, tired and drunk" Teri Hatcher
"Fun will now commence" 7of9
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