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FDK-First Venture 1/1 #22399 06/09/05 12:09 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast daneel OP Kerth
OP daneel Kerth Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast	You know how to distract us from nagging you!!! Jose "Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot

Re: FDK-First Venture 1/1 #22400 06/09/05 02:59 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 411 España Cristina Beat Reporter
Cristina Beat Reporter Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 411 España	Where do you think you're going??? And what do you mean 1/1???? WE WANT TO SEE THAT DATEEEEEE...... Please?????? Cris

Re: FDK-First Venture 1/1 #22401 06/09/05 03:19 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY Laurach Pulitzer
Laurach Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY	Hi Nan I loved that you continued this story. It was really sweet. I did notice 2 type O's one is in the first sentance I think it shoud be "your" instead of you. ALso the end ends weird like it is cut off. it ends with just the letter F. Did something not post? Laura Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?” Caroline's "Stardust"

Re: FDK-First Venture 1/1 #22402 06/09/05 03:31 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 843 my computer malu Features Writer
malu Features Writer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 843 my computer	I get the same thing: story ends with an 'F'. malu

Re: FDK-First Venture 1/1 #22403 06/09/05 04:38 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,380 Likes: 1 The Lone Star State Nan Kerth
Nan Kerth Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,380 Likes: 1 The Lone Star State	Sorry about that, Laura and malu, I edited something and my computer glitched and cut off 2/3 of the story. It's fixed now. Try it again. Nan Earth is the insane asylum for the universe.

Re: FDK-First Venture 1/1 #22404 06/09/05 07:12 PM
Joined: Oct 2004 Posts: 509 Mexico Karla Kent Columnist
Karla Kent Columnist Joined: Oct 2004 Posts: 509 Mexico	I like it Well done Karla My journal: http://charmingkarla.livejournal.com/

Re: FDK-First Venture 1/1 #22405 06/10/05 02:25 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 454 The Netherlands Xanabee Beat Reporter
Xanabee Beat Reporter Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 454 The Netherlands	Interesting premise, Nan. Good old Herb did find AltLois after all and told AltClark to go and get her! Can't understand why so many FoLC don't like the dapper little man. I had a delightful deja vu when I saw Asimov's 'The End of Eternity' mentioned. In my twenties I was addicted to a series of SciFi publications named 'Tales by Hitchcock' or something similar like that. A lot of Asimov's stuff was published in there. I lost my collection during several moves since then, but now you've renewed my craving for Asimov's stories. Guess this means I'll have to hop over to 'The American Bookstore' downtown and see if they still sell them. Nice take on AltLois' return, Nan. Ursie Lois: Well, I like my quirks. I think they make me unique. Clark: You certainly are unique. Clark: You're high maintenance, you know that? Lois: But I'm worth it!

Re: FDK-First Venture 1/1 #22406 06/10/05 04:27 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,644 North Carolina, USA ChiefPam Pulitzer
ChiefPam Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,644 North Carolina, USA	Hah, he finally asked her out <g> Good sequel, Nan! And I loved Lois's reasoning that someone messed up the ruins, so it might as well be them... it's so Tempus-like to try to leave a message. For a moment, I feared the message would be "CK=S" (Masques flashback, I think) but I guess everyone already knows that, don't they? I wouldn't mind seeing the date... but then I would happily read almost anything you wrote, so that's no surprise PJ "You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed. He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement." "You can say that again," she told him. "I have a...." "Oh, shut up." --Stardust, Caroline K

Re: FDK-First Venture 1/1 #22407 06/10/05 05:20 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,994 In a minivan, next to Elisabet... Mister Data Pulitzer
Mister Data Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,994 In a minivan, next to Elisabet...	Great addendum to this universe. More soon please James “…with God everything is possible.” Matthew 19:26. Also read Nan's Terran Underground!

Re: FDK-First Venture 1/1 #22408 06/10/05 06:37 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY Laurach Pulitzer
Laurach Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY	Oh loved the rest of the story! Great job! Laura Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?” Caroline's "Stardust"

Re: FDK-First Venture 1/1 #22409 06/10/05 10:08 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 116 Keladry Hack from Nowheresville
Keladry Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 116	That was way too short . Ditto the others. I want to see the date, please? Janine I Do Whatever My Rice Krispies Tell Me To

Re: FDK-First Venture 1/1 #22410 06/11/05 01:12 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia T TriciaW Pulitzer
TriciaW Pulitzer T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia	Nan A great sequel! I thoroughly enjoyed it. I would love to read about the date. Tricia

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