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When I started reading this part I was like whinging

please just try to be happy next time cool

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Hi,

Great part. help This time he should go back with Dr. Kline, or stop before the bomb explode.

More ASAP, please.

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After reading this I had to go eat half a dozen chocolate doughnuts.


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Hi,

Where is Take Three? grumble

More, more! hyper

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yes...
we want take three
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Terry

At first I thought I was reading the same story as Take One. Then I realised it has an alternate ending. smile

Another very moving, sad story! razz Bernie definitely needs to fix this situation.

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At least this time isn't Dan!! laugh

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Interesting idea - two takes on the same basic plot. So the man is a Clark-clone? Hmmm... I'm curious how these both turn out, but I think I like Take one just a tiny bit better.


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Interesting idea.

I admit the idea of Lois marrying Clark's clone sounds a little weird to me, but, well, what the heck? You don't get to see that every day, after all! laugh

Good job! thumbsup

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Hey this is a really cool way to tell a story; kind of a Butterfly Effect type story, well sort of. At first, like some of the others also said, I was definitely confused. But honestly, this so so unique!! wink I prefer a clone of Clark over Dan ANY day, but I am hoping w/ another take, it'll be Clark himself!! smile1

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Interesting story. So in "Take One" both children die, Lois and Clark part ways and She ends up married to Dan Scardino.

He works with Klein to change the past, and this time the children live but Clark dies. Maybe all they were able to do was get a short message to Clark.

I can picture them trying to Send Superman back and all he is able to do is contact himself with a brief message. So Clark has Lois work on the children first.

And this time Lois points out
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At least Utopia is still viable.
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here's an unfinished third part rattling around on my hard drive.
I'm sure we'd all like to read it. smile1

These have been dark and I do mean DARK wildguy

I wonder if for the third you have Clark die, no clone but Lois and her Children able to work past the pain and function as a family unit?


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