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#167740 04/26/12 11:30 AM
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Posted by Angelsmaw:

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I need some help with getting some old stories off my hard drive. They are fairly long, and are written in notepad, which I am given to understand is not as easy to beta.

VirginiaR has been helping me with my shorter stories, and has done an excellent job (and hasn't even blown up at me once about my bad spelling.) But multi-tasking while trying to write your own stories leaves one a little overwhelmed. So I thought I'd try to get someone who is willing to read, correct, and even say where the weaknesses are in my plots.

I also have almost finished a cross-over/mistaken-identity of fourth season L&C, with first season DH (pre-Mike), and 3rd Season Las Vegaas (where he owned the casino.) I have had a lot of help with fleshing out Casey, but it will take someone who knows L&C, Susan when she was a ditzy, and Casey who wasn't fleshed out much on the show. If you think you know these three different shows and can beta with a view of the three becoming one unit, please contact me.

Pat
Pat, the Willing Betas thread is for Beta Readers to post in, volunteering to beta for authors, rather than for authors to post in asking for a beta. So I've deleted your post in that thread and moved it to here. smile

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#167741 04/28/12 08:21 PM
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Bump this one up to the top again.

I need for someone who knows L&C, DH, and Las Vegas to help me beta a new story. It meshed pretty good into one story, but I need eyes to see if they tell where I can take something away and the seams will no longer show.

Pat (angelsgmaw)

#167742 04/30/12 05:12 AM
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Would love to Beta one of your stories, but not Las Vegas, I stopped watching after s2.

Let me know...


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A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.
#167743 05/01/12 04:38 PM
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I'm sorry - I like L&C but have no idea about the other two series. Sorry!


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