If you have not found a Beta for your story I would be happy to read it. Sadly I have not watched any of the Desperate Housewives series although I must say Teri looks great!
Morgana
A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.
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