I'd be happy to take a look at what you've got as long as you're not in a big hurry. I have limited free time due to HappyBaby (5 months old today, BTW), so I could give you about an hour every other night. I give lots of feedback and I can be pretty nitpicky, but I try to be encouraging as well, and I always remember that it's your story, so I'll never take offense if you disagree. If you want references, I've worked some with Carol M. and a lot with Bob Bartholomew.
Let me know if you're interested.
Happy