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 Comments here please.
Elle Roberts
She's a dancer who doesn't dance. He's a painter who doesn't paint. It's like a bohemian version of the Island of Misfit Toys. – “Igby Goes Down”
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Glad you're back!  Fantastic part!  Don't wait to post next part! 
"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
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Yay, you're back!  And more West Wind!!  Brilliant segment, as usual, Elle. Loved Clark continually trying to get a word in edgewise with Cat and failing miserably. <G> And it was while surveying the crowd as he waited for the noise to die down that he first saw Lois. O...M...G!!!  Oh, and I have no idea who they are <g> but this made me laugh anyway: Since they will probably never be good in this universe, I felt the least I could do was make the NFL's Cincinnati Bengals a decent team somewhere else. LabRat (who thinks with that cliffhanger Elle really has graduated and could lose the in training label. )
Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly.
Aramis: Yes, sorry.
Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal.
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Elle I'm so glad to see you back posting. Another excellent part! Poor Clark, not being able to get a word in! What a place to stop!!  I can't wait to see what happens next. Please post more soon. Tricia 
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Yaayyy!! We really were beginning to get worried about you, Elle! I'm just about to dash off to teach, so since LabRat said everything I wanted to say, just read her comments again, okay?  Great section! Loved it! Want more!  Oh, by the way, speaking of your 'evil' status, have you seen this poll? .
Just a fly-by! *waves*
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Elle,
It is still hard for me to believe that Cat is the editor. So, what was Lois doing in Cincinnatti?
Actually, I sort of remember the Bengals being good when I was a little kid. I've never liked football, but I sort of remembe the Bengals having some good players in the '80s/
- Alicia
Laura "The Yellow Dart" U. (Alicia U. on the archive)
"A hero is an ordinary individual who finds the strength to persevere and endure in spite of overwhelming obstacles." -- Christopher Reeve
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Elle "evil-in-training" Roberts Yeah, and Trask is really the Easter Bunny. 
"Meg...who let you back in the house?" -Family Guy
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Elle,
good segment
glad you are back
ditto others
nuf said
more soon please
merry
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Hi, Great part.  I was missing this story.  And it was while surveying the crowd as he waited for the noise to die down that he first saw Lois. Wait a minute! Lois in Cincinnati? Get back here now! More, more soon, please. MAF
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Wow he finally saw her. More soon! Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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Loved Cat steamrolling effortlessly over Clark. Loved giving Clark a more down-to-earth assignment for a change. Adored Clark not thinking and putting on an enemy baseball cap -- too few authors pick up Clark's obsession with sports. Great cliffhanger. Ignore the "evil" labels. Good cliffhangers promote good cardio exercise. Hazel, who wants MORE!
Lois: You know the deal.
Clark: Superman gets the guys in capes, Lois and Clark get the guys in suits.
-- Action Comics 827
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Good instalment. There is no such thing as an evil cliffhanger. Deprevation builds character. They way you are writing Cat, why is Clark looking for Lois. He should just go after Cat. (I'll take Lois ) You can write and post MORE now. Tank (who doesn't think that evil can be trained... one either is or isn't, and El... )
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Hi Elle, We are waiting! Where are you? MAF
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
MAF
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Hey! For some reason, I thought I'd actually posted my comments on this... Well, I guess now I can tell you that this is good and nag (beg? :p ) for the next part, all in one post (or should I do it in two, so my post count rises?? ) This was another great part, but, like Jose said, your training definitely seems almost through. We NEED to know what happens after he sees Lois!! SO come back here and give us more of this story!!!! (PLEASE?  Wait, you're too evil to be softened by my cries... or are you??? :p ) Cris
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Anybody know whether this story is gonna be updated anytime soon? I just read the first nine parts at the archive, and I'm kinda itchin' for more, but I see that the author hasn't posted since 2003. Is she around anymore?
"You take turns, advise and protect one another, even heal or be healed when the going gets too tough. I know! That's not a game--that's friendship!" ~Shelly Mezzanoble, Confessions of a Part-Time Sorceress: A Girl's Guide to the Dungeons & Dragons Game Darcy\'s Place
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I also would like to see this story continued. Although I read it when it first appeared on the archive, I still occasionally indulge in a nostalgia trip and re-read it -- wistfully hoping to read more of it.
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Sadly, Elle hasn't been active in the fandom for a long time. I miss her. And her stories.  She was a very talented author and a fun person to hang out with here on the mbs. So I think this one is in the category of 'don't expect it to ever be finished, but, hey, you never can tell'. LabRat
Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly.
Aramis: Yes, sorry.
Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal.
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Actually, I thought that When The West Wind Moves was finished, and it was the sequel that got abandoned. Can't remember what the sequel was called, but I'm sure a search would bring it up. Wendy
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Actually, I thought that When The West Wind Moves was finished, It was a bit confusing. Elle apparently considered it finished. But it has 'TBC' at the end. I wasn't aware that she'd begun posting the next bit/sequel - whatever you want to call it. <g> But maybe she did. Worth searching for anyway, just in case. LabRat
Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly.
Aramis: Yes, sorry.
Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal.
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Hi,
First part
Fast Enough by Elle Roberts
Second part.
When the West Wind Moves by Elle Roberts
Third part - INC.
Five Steps Down by Elle Roberts
MAF
Maria D. Ferdez.
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MAF
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