Well, I'm looking for another beta reader for the story I'm working on again.
As I had mentioned before, it's a next generation. But it's very different than most next generation fics I've read because of who it involves.
I hate to give away too many details because I'll give away my secrets.
But I have to say something in order to find someone who is willing to work with me. Specifically, it's a love story between LNC's oldest daughter (an artist) and Lex Luthor's nephew (who owns a chocolate shop).
I hope the premise of this one isn't too hard for people to believe this time, but I'd like to know before it's finished. That way, if I do need to rework it suginicantly, it will be easier to start over.
It does have some science in it that is a little "out there" (some which I have already mentioned)but I think that is the case in the show, anyway. Still, if it is too much of a problem, I like to know in advance.,
I'm also a but nervous because it doesn't have much of an A - Plot. There are plenty of stories that don't have A - plots, I know that, but I'm worried it will make a differce because the main characters aren't LNC. So I can't decide if it really does need an A plot. Help.
As with my last one, I'm not very good at writing humor. Since very few people want to read a story that's all serious, I could really use some help with this.
Finally, I would love to come up with a creative name for my chocolate shop. (Right now all I've got is "the chocolate shop.)
Desiree - Sorry I haven't got Search for the Daily Planet done. (Although I do have more done than you last saw if you want to see it.) But I kind of got excited about this one and decided to run with it. I'd love to have you back if you want to beta again for me. But I wasn't sure if you'd have the time, being your first year teaching. And I had mentioned this story in passing to you before, but I could't tell if you were interested.
I'll probably need someone to look at a least 3 -4 chapters at a time for what I want feedback/critism on. If and when the story gets finished, it'll probably be between 80 - 100 pages single space this time. I like stories with depth.
(Pronounced to rhyme with its alternate title, "Cocoa Beau").