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FDK: Wedding Consequences: Revised Ending #14907 08/24/04 06:37 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,994 In a minivan, next to Elisabet... Mister Data OP Pulitzer
OP Mister Data Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,994 In a minivan, next to Elisabet...	I didn't know how you could have improved on your story, but you did. I just knew that the 'message' from Clark was a phony! James “…with God everything is possible.” Matthew 19:26. Also read Nan's Terran Underground!

Re: FDK: Wedding Consequences: Revised Ending #14908 08/24/04 07:17 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,047 NJ Supes1fan Top Banana
Supes1fan Top Banana Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,047 NJ	Bravo..great additions to the finale! Now we have an 'in' for a sequel, when Lois and Clark get back to Metropolis to take on 'The Mrs.' Nice Job ~Liz Lois: Can I go? Clark: No. Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go. Clark: Then why do you ask? Lois: I’m trying to be nice.

Re: FDK: Wedding Consequences: Revised Ending #14909 08/24/04 07:22 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. Pulitzer
mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Great story. Love the revised ending. Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: FDK: Wedding Consequences: Revised Ending #14910 08/24/04 07:58 AM
Joined: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,269 Connecticut ChaaBreh Top Banana
ChaaBreh Top Banana Joined: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,269 Connecticut	Loved it! Chris "Together we are stronger than each of us is apart"

Re: FDK: Wedding Consequences: Revised Ending #14911 08/24/04 03:56 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 89 LaurieD Freelance Reporter
LaurieD Freelance Reporter Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 89	Yes. An even stronger ending to a fine story. That really adds more punch. This is one of the best I've read in some time! LaurieD

Re: FDK: Wedding Consequences: Revised Ending #14912 08/24/04 06:18 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,627 Gulf Shores, AL Shadow Pulitzer
Shadow Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,627 Gulf Shores, AL	Bravo! An extra punch to it! JD "Meg...who let you back in the house?" -Family Guy

Re: FDK: Wedding Consequences: Revised Ending #14913 08/25/04 12:04 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast daneel Kerth
daneel Kerth Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast	Good enhancement!! "Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot

Re: FDK: Wedding Consequences: Revised Ending #14914 08/26/04 03:41 AM
Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 1,047 where the 7 hills and 3 rivers... CC Aiken Top Banana
CC Aiken Top Banana Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 1,047 where the 7 hills and 3 rivers...	Wonderful. Loved what you did with the first ending, and this even more so. So great, Nan. I think my favorite from you, yet! CC You mean we're supposed to have lives? Oh crap! ~Tank

Re: FDK: Wedding Consequences: Revised Ending #14915 08/27/04 09:45 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia T TriciaW Pulitzer
TriciaW Pulitzer T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia	Nan I love all the changes. Tricia

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