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Feedback goes here! Thanks
Grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change, The courage to change the things I can, And the wisdom to know the difference.
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Interesting twist!
I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this. Oh, and you write an excellent 1st season Lois.
Irene
I try to take one day at a time, but sometimes several days attack me at once.
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Hi, Great part. She brought herself back down from orbit in time to hear Scott finally continue. "Rumor has it there is a certain very hard to find FBI office called Bureau 39 that was somehow involved with the disappearance of Miracle Man last year, and also that certain parties are now trying to cover up what little points to the department's existence."
Conspiracy? Bureau 39 = ? FBI cover-up of MM disappearance? More notes flew down onto her pad. More excitement. Not only was it bigger than huge, it was her dream story.
"Involved with the disappearance?" she asked. "What is Bureau 39? What does this have to do with Thompson? It wasn't even solidly proven that Miracle Man existed in the first place!" This is getting juicy.
Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF
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Oh, and you write an excellent 1st season Lois. See, Diane! </font><blockquote><font size="1" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">quote:</font><hr /><font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif"> Your Sara
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Great Part! Your Lois is so ... Lois! Lois is going to investigate George Thompson, Bureau 39 and "Miracle Man"! Post next part soon! Ingra
Clark: What is that? Lois: It's my word. Clark: There is no such word. Lois: Sure there is. Someone's a chump, therefore, he's chumpy. Clark: Try again. Lois: Are you challenging me? Clark: You bet your sweet little chumpy I am.
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"Meg...who let you back in the house?" -Family Guy
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Here it comes..the force of nature that is Lois Lane will hit like a hurricane..lookout Clark Kent! LOL
I ditto the others, your Lois is right on! I look forward to the next part!
~Liz
Lois: Can I go? Clark: No. Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know Iām going to go. Clark: Then why do you ask? Lois: Iām trying to be nice.
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More!!
"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
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Continues to be good, Diane - looking forward to more!! On-the-move-Wendy
Just a fly-by! *waves*
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