I just finished posting my story, 'Lois, Clark & Sharlynn'. I am planning to submit it to the Archive (relatively) soon. So I'm asking for your help here:
If you have read this story, and have any criticism on language/context etc., I would be more than glad to receive it. I wrote and finished this story without much help, so I need all the opinions I can get.
Also, if you have any ideas for the title, I'd like to hear them.
Please email your criticism/opinions/suggestions without any hesitance at lcannabtg@yahoo.gr
Thank you!
AnnaBtG.
