I need a beta, preferably someone who has also seen the LXG movie and actually liked it, or at least, didn't entirely hate it.

I have the first chapter done. I'd like to get some good feedback on it before I continue, though. Subsequent chapters should be finished fairly quickly, as long as I don't get writer's block.

I believe there's a hero in all of us that keeps us honest, gives us strength, makes us noble, and finally allows us to die with pride, even though sometimes we have to be steady and give up the thing we want the most. Even our dreams. -- Aunt May, Spider-Man 2