Adventure, conspiracy, love, illness(?), your regular Kansas farmboy who can manage an emergency landing... in short, a Nan's Plotting... I love it! I'm looking forward to reading the next part!
Kaethel (still shuddering, but very happy Clark managed that emergency landing)
- I'm your partner. I'm your friend. - Is that what we are? - Oh, you know what? I don't know what we are. We kiss and then we never talk about it. We nearly die frozen in each other's arms, but we never talk about it, so no, I got no clue what we are.
Wow! I come back after being away a week and a half, only to find not only do I have much catching up to do with both Twins and Damaged, AND another story by Nan. It will take a few days to get caught up!
Great start, Nan! You know how to capture your readers right away. I'm glad Clark knows Lois' true feelings now, before she learns of Superman's identity.
Whoa! You certainly know how to rack up the tension quickly, Nan! Okay, so the plane's been infiltrated - and is there more Kryptonite? But if that's the case, either it was to ward off Superman, or someone knows that Clark is Superman.
In either case, it's not good... hurry up and write more!!
Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF
