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Sorry, I wasn't clear.

I didn't mean changed as in personality, but changed as in training. He was a wet-behind-the-ears cadet when we first meet him and in this story, he seems very confident and take charge.

Of course, a lot of that has to do with hime trying to save his partner.

btw, them jumping out into the hyperspace stream isn't going to be a walk in the park, is it?

James

I read part 10 a few days ago, but forgot to comment. Sorry, Nan. This continues to be excellent. I'm glad everyone got back to Lavirra safely, even if tensions are still running high.

Okay, so when's part 11?

PJ

That was quick Thanks!

Boy, I tell ya, I do *not* want to get on Major Westover's bad side. He's nowhere near as young and harmless as he looks.

I can't remember, but isn't there a later story where Kaley is caught, and Alan & Mark go after him? I'll have to re-read it, now that I know some important background.

Your ability to create (co-create, in this case) an incredibly detailed universe leaves me somewhat in awe. Thanks for sharing.

PJ

You're thinking of Toomelli's Moon. That actually happened about a year before Two Giants for David.

Tara

Actually, that was Toomelli's Moon, which is earlier than Two Giants.

But yes, a psychic trying to save his partner is about as harmless as a cobra -- and an irritated one at that -- which is something Kaley found out the hard way.

Nan

Okay, thanks for the tip. Puts a little different spin on it if this was *before* Kaley crossed them. Still, I'll probably re-read. Come to think of it, instead of re-reading in random fashion, I should probably go to the timeline James keeps up, and just start at the beginning and read 'em all in chronological order. 'Cause I don't have a job or a family or a real life at all :rolleyes:

PJ

That's what Elisabeth and I are doing now. It is sooo hard not to let things slip to her, at least the important things.

She doesn't leave feed back on these, but she is enjoying reading it to me.

James

That's what Elisabeth and I are doing now. It is sooo hard not to let things slip to her, at least the important things.

She doesn't leave feed back on these, but she is enjoying reading it to me.

James

PS, did I mention that Rite of Passage would be a good one to work on next or maybe Awakenings

Personally, as one who's read a bunch of the ones no one else here has seen yet, I'd like to see Wonderland Revisited. It's a funny one

Tara