Lois & Clark Fanfic Message Boards
Previous Thread
Next Thread
Print Thread
#138792 02/01/07 05:32 AM
Joined: Apr 2003
Posts: 2,994
Pulitzer
OP Offline
Pulitzer
Joined: Apr 2003
Posts: 2,994
Vector 6.

Quote
That does it!" Dagmar spun about and headed down the hallway. "I don't care, anymore! I don't care what Papa Powell does and I don't care if I lose everything! I'm leaving him, now! Tonight!"

He followed her. "Where are you going?"

"To pack! And to break all of Harold's toys before I go!"

He smothered a grin. "Honey, it's not worth it. Besides, it'll just make him madder."

"*Good*!" She entered the bedroom and there was the sound of some small object shattering against the wall. The odor of expensive cologne filled the air.

He followed her into the bedroom. Dagmar was yanking expensive suits from the closet and throwing them on the floor.

"Dagmar, we don't have time for this ...."

"Two minutes is all I'll need." She left the room at a run, to return less than ten seconds later, a bottle of spaghetti sauce in one hand. She snapped the lid off and emptied the entire contents into the pile of suits and threw the jar on top. "Okay, you're right." She yanked a few articles of clothing from the closet and a suitcase from beneath the bed. "Selena's room is next door. Run get her some clothes. It doesn't matter what. I'll be done here in a minute."

"Just bring your personal items. I'll buy you both all the clothes you want. I don't want you to have to wear anything Harold provided, anyway."

She stopped. "You're right. Of course you're right!" She tossed the clothing on the floor and turned to snatch three holographs and a jewelry box from the dresser. She emptied the box on the bed and fished among the contents to remove two rings and a bracelet. "My mother's," she explained briefly. She had removed her wedding ring, he saw. It lay half-submerged in the spaghetti sauce on top of the clothing.

"I guess Harold will get the idea," he remarked.
I like her attitude.

Harold was hoisted on his one petard.

Quote
I hope so. Will you marry me?"

Her laughter increased. He watched her with a sinking heart, waiting for her to say no.

But she reached out, caught him by the ears and kissed him hard on the mouth. "You are the most unconventional man I've ever known, Squadron Commander Mombasa. No moonlit gardens and white roses for you, huh? You prefer a storm on the beach for your proposal setting."

"I ..."

"With your woman soaking wet and covered with sand."

"But --"

"Yes, I'll marry you."
smile1 jump

Quote
"Old Winston's gonna birth a trenchcrawler!"
Nice paraphrase of "He's going to have a cow!"

Quote
It was the man who had come aboard his ship just prior to his leave -- the tall, muscular fellow who had carried the cage full of Lord Frexvor's "pets". What the hell was *he* doing here?
Ah, yes, the A-plot has come back...

Vector 7

Nan, did you follow me to New York recently...The attitude that Mombasa is trying to pull off is remarkably like half the drivers there...

Quote
If you give me any trouble, I'll stun you," he said. An idea hit him. "I'm with the Terran Underground," he added. "I can't let you see my face."
That's right, blame it on the TUs...

Quote
"Where were you going?"

"To my future in-laws' house. They're having me over to dinner tonight ... or were." His voice trailed off.

"You're going to get married?"

"Next week -- I hope."

"Don't change your plans," Mombasa told him.

A faint grin tugged at the man's lips. "Okay."
Nice conversation. A hallmark of your writing...


Quote
For the first time the “pet keeper's” voice betrayed emotion. "It ain't nothing you want to get; take it from me. First you think you have the flu, so you go to bed and drink fluids. Then your kidneys cut out on you -- actually, they sort of rot away. You fill up with fluid -- lungs, heart, everything -- and end up drowning in your own secretions. Happens fast: less than twelve hours, usually. And if you manage to get to a doctor, and they patch on a syntha-kidney, the next step is for your blood to quit clotting. You start to bleed from everywhere. Spots all over you from broken blood vessels under the skin and what pee you got comes out as pure blood. So they give you clotting factors to stop it. Then the nervous system goes. The paralysis starts in your toes and move up. Takes about a week before it hits your lungs. That usually finishes you off. If you survive that --"
Eww! Please tell me that that is not symptoms for a real disease!!!

Well, it sounds like Mombasa took care of everything...so with two parts left, why do I get the feeling that your not done with us yet?


Vector 8

Quote
He dumped both hat and sunglasses into a waste converter at the shuttle stop, pulled up his hood and waited,
Oohh, I bet that would make things difficult for detectives in the future...

Quote
second classer named Paine
Arnie Paine...where have I heard that name before?


Only one part to go...It sounds like it will be a good one.

James


“…with God everything is possible.” Matthew 19:26.


Also read Nan's Terran Underground!
#138793 02/01/07 07:21 AM
Joined: Apr 2003
Posts: 2,380
Likes: 1
Nan Offline
Kerth
Offline
Kerth
Joined: Apr 2003
Posts: 2,380
Likes: 1
Lol, James! I lived in Brooklyn for six months when I was 21, before coming out to California to go to school. It taught me everything about New York drivers that I needed to know.

Nan


Earth is the insane asylum for the universe.

Moderated by  KSaraSara 

Link Copied to Clipboard
Powered by UBB.threads™ PHP Forum Software 7.7.5