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#138447 11/11/05 02:38 PM
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Well, chapter three is ready for viewing. ::blinks:: Lab Rat once more beta genious... Guh. Sleepy. ::Rubs eyes::

I... don't really have a lot to say. Maybe later. Bye.


If I can't be a good example, I'll just have to settle for being a horrible warning. ::Shifty Eyes::
#138448 11/11/05 03:26 PM
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Very nice chapter indeed, Kathleen. Labrat did a good job, but I'm sure that you did a lot of the work too! wink

Looking forward to a lot more!

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Mom


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#138449 11/11/05 04:07 PM
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Still fascinating, Kathleen! I like that she's thinking about Griffin. Thinking about him a lot. goofy

One thing I do wonder about. She's been introduced to this whole new life, a world she's never known about, a family she never knew existed. She's meeting a woman she's been told is her mother... but she already has a family, a mother. So how does she feel about the idea that this is her real family? What about her own family, the mother who brought her up? Choosing furnishings for her new rooms... does she remember her room at home and feel nostalgic for it?

It's quite a change Sabriel's experiencing, and I could certainly see her having problems reconciling it with her normal life. Does she see this as her life from now on, or is the thought continually in her mind that any minute now she'll wake up and be home in her own bed? Or that whenever she decides she's had enough she's going to ask Griffin to take her home?

More soon! Keep up the great writing. thumbsup


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#138450 11/12/05 01:42 PM
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What do you think I'm going to deal with next chapter, Wendy? Heh heh heh... :grin: And mom, of course I did a lot of the work! I... uh... Actually, I'm not to clear on WHAT I did...


If I can't be a good example, I'll just have to settle for being a horrible warning. ::Shifty Eyes::

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