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#138279 06/05/05 03:25 PM
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Hi,

I'm open to any feedback, especially constructive advice.


I believe there's a hero in all of us that keeps us honest, gives us strength, makes us noble, and finally allows us to die with pride, even though sometimes we have to be steady and give up the thing we want the most. Even our dreams. -- Aunt May, Spider-Man 2
#138280 06/10/05 04:45 AM
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Hey, Emily...

I've been meaning to catch up on this one... I guess I missed the story before this. I could still follow things, though, after a little bit of puzzling smile I don't read fantasy much, but this is an interesting universe you've set up.

Small problem, though -- it looks like most of part 4 didn't post, so I stopped there... could you edit and include the rest? smile Then I'll read the ending.

Btw, I'm deeply suspicious of this "oh, btw, I lost a bit of jewelry once, could you get it for me if you have a chance, it's not important, really" But I don't distrust the queen, so I'm not sure what to make of it.

Looking forward to reading parts 4 and 5! smile

PJ


"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."

--Stardust, Caroline K
#138281 06/10/05 07:31 AM
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I will repost part 4 later today. If you really can't wait to read it, it's on my website.


I believe there's a hero in all of us that keeps us honest, gives us strength, makes us noble, and finally allows us to die with pride, even though sometimes we have to be steady and give up the thing we want the most. Even our dreams. -- Aunt May, Spider-Man 2

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