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#138199 03/20/05 03:13 PM
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But he couldn't sleep -- not with that thing lurking out there ...

The morning sun woke him.
That was such a great transition that I had to point it out. smile

Interesting about the native psychics--how afraid they seem to be of Alan and company, yet how easily and efficiently they kill the 'trols and Jils.

Lynn is still crying, and my heart is breaking for her. Does she know something about her dad? Or is she scared in the woods? Why doesn't she hear Alan calling her?

Waiting impatiently for the next part... hyper


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Another great post. I like the fact that the natives seem to be protecting Alan, Mark and Julia and presumably, Lynn.

James


“…with God everything is possible.” Matthew 19:26.


Also read Nan's Terran Underground!

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