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#137810 12/04/03 12:58 AM
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I read this last night before bed, but didn't have time to comment... now I have time to comment and I'm not sure I remember what happened laugh I'll just go back and peek...

Bradley Russell certainly draws the eye! laugh Poor Alan, feeling overshadowed... though that change girl might just "change" his mind goofy And then I love the way he wins at slots, while trying *not* to cheat!

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the clothing in which she was nearly dressed
lol, great phrase <g>

write (edit?) more, post more!

PJ


"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."

--Stardust, Caroline K
#137811 12/04/03 08:02 AM
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Very well done, but I am confused . Twice you mention Alan getting in trouble near a swimming pool, but I, for the life of me, can't remember any such incident.

Is this from an as-yet-to-be released story or do I need a ginko pill???

confused James confused


“…with God everything is possible.” Matthew 19:26.


Also read Nan's Terran Underground!
#137812 12/04/03 09:45 AM
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The incident with the swimming pool was how Alan was spotted by the Jils in the first place. He guessed the exact number of poker chips in an Olympic-sized swimming pool.

Nan


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#137813 12/04/03 10:12 AM
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So it was in a story that we haven't seen yet...

Good, that means more to look forward to...

James notworthy


“…with God everything is possible.” Matthew 19:26.


Also read Nan's Terran Underground!

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