I read this last night before bed, but didn't have time to comment... now I have time to comment and I'm not sure I remember what happened I'll just go back and peek...

Bradley Russell certainly draws the eye! Poor Alan, feeling overshadowed... though that change girl might just "change" his mind And then I love the way he wins at slots, while trying *not* to cheat!

lol, great phrase <g>

write (edit?) more, post more!

PJ

Very well done, but I am . Twice you mention Alan getting in trouble near a swimming pool, but I, for the life of me, can't remember any such incident.

Is this from an as-yet-to-be released story or do I need a ginko pill???

James

The incident with the swimming pool was how Alan was spotted by the Jils in the first place. He guessed the exact number of poker chips in an Olympic-sized swimming pool.

Nan

So it was in a story that we haven't seen yet...

Good, that means more to look forward to...

James