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Oohhhh what a place to leave off on Nan!!!

I can see all your loyal readers heads popping with that cliffhanger!

But the plot is moving along nicely and I like the interaction that Alan and Lyn and Mark have with the rest of the characters.. Its hard to be a legend in your own time and they are handling it with finesse

Nan, you are VERY , VERY !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Especially if that blaster is set to overload! (by the way, it might help with the suspence if we had some outward indication that said blaster was on overload, like a high pitched whine (hmm no thats been done...how about a really insistant blinking light!)

James