I haven't had a chance to read this section yet, but I am going to try today.
~later~
Okay, I've read it.
Very interesting. I love how you make your characters come alive with the little things...
Alan Westover lay on his stomach, his youngest son straddling his back and bouncing energetically. Alan groaned.
"Don't, Matthew! I'm too full! Go play with the others! Jill, come get Matthew and take him over there."
That was priceless!
I didn't know you were a Marvel comics fan! I loved the scene with Fiske, though portly hardly does the man justice! The Fiske of Marveldom is a mountain of a man that would make 7XL shirts groan. Course that is almost all muscle...
I am loving this story. More soon please.
James
