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I know I've pushed the last four or five posts a little, but I want to get past the stuff people have already read and on to the new material.

As I said before the server crashed the first time, I'd think the Terran Underground might have noticed something isn't kosher with the Jils by now. It's time for the Terran resistance to get into the act. I hope everyone remembers the comment Karl overheard about "the Westover girl".

Comments, please?

awesome!

Nethra
(though, for a person who was in a coma for 7 months, Ed's surprisingly strong)

ooooh,

/me is all excited here and is very happy... new stuff!!!!

Awesome, and MORE!!!!

New stuff....YEAH!!!!!!

So, Steph is almost a chip off the old crock. Let's just hope that time will soften his edges.

Nan, you said that this tale has one twist and turn after another. This is like rideing a rollercoast from the nether regions of the underworld.

But, I'm sure that none of us will lose our lunch at the end.

I'd say more soon please, but then you are posting every day, so I won't nag.

James