I'm still going to work on Touring Clark's world, but maybe i can mix it into this one now that Lois is going to be hanging out with Superman all the time, perhaps i can write it with this theme instead. Of course it needs to be rewritten to fit this format, but not much!
I too hated this episode. it was one i never liked watching. Hopefully i can make it work this time though. it always seemed so stupid to me that he had to know for sure that she loved Clark before he'd tell her his secret, and that he'd only have her if she loved that part of himself first!
Thanks for all your responses. I know i have a lot of challenges in writing this one. but that makes it all the more fun!
It's always such an embarrassment. Having to do away with someone. It's like announcing to the world that you lack the savvy and the finesse to deal with the problem more creatively. I mean, there have been times, naturally, when I've had to have people eliminated, but it's always saddened me. I've always felt like I've let myself down somehow.
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