|
|
Joined: Apr 2003
Posts: 2,994
Pulitzer
|
OP
Pulitzer
Joined: Apr 2003
Posts: 2,994 |
Wow, nice set up Nan.
Looking forward to reading this in the months to come.
James
|
|
|
|
Joined: Apr 2003
Posts: 151
Hack from Nowheresville
|
|
Hack from Nowheresville
Joined: Apr 2003
Posts: 151 |
Another Nan story! Oh goody! I love your intro to this story. The A-plot is nicely in place, and I would love to see if/how Lois connects the dots.  I can't wait for part 2. What's your posting schedule going to be like? Okay, I promised myself to lurk only to reduce the time I spend on the boards. But I couldn't resist posting my comments given the title of this story.  *Tells myself firmly to resist posting comments and start lurking again*  metwin1
|
|
|
|
Joined: Apr 2003
Posts: 82
Freelance Reporter
|
|
Freelance Reporter
Joined: Apr 2003
Posts: 82 |
Due to a real busy RL, I had decended back into the realms of lurking. Nan, the title of your newest story is just too intriging. I *had* to pop up and comment. metwin1 is also typing a comment right now and by looks of it, she's going to post before I do. edit: she did. Anyway, great story premise! I'm looking forward to more. --meclone2-- *decends back to lurking*
|
|
|
|
Joined: Apr 2003
Posts: 3,846
Pulitzer
|
|
Pulitzer
Joined: Apr 2003
Posts: 3,846 |
Hi, Great start. 
Maria D. Ferdez.
---
Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
MAF
|
|
|
|
Joined: Sep 2003
Posts: 379
Beat Reporter
|
|
Beat Reporter
Joined: Sep 2003
Posts: 379 |
Nan, I love Lois' inner-babbling! Excellent! --Wanda 
"He's a man. I'm a woman. Do you want me to draw you a diagram?" -Lois Lane, I've Got a Crush on You.
|
|
|
|
Joined: Jun 2004
Posts: 3
Blogger
|
|
Blogger
Joined: Jun 2004
Posts: 3 |
Great beginning. I can't wait to see where this might be leading.
Keep up the great work.
Ladyhawke
|
|
|
|
Joined: Apr 2003
Posts: 3,627
Pulitzer
|
|
Pulitzer
Joined: Apr 2003
Posts: 3,627 |
Yay! I just finished reading the first fic two days ago, so I'm excited the sequel's here. Lois' babbling was great. JD
"Meg...who let you back in the house?" -Family Guy
|
|
|
|
Joined: Apr 2003
Posts: 2,217
Kerth
|
|
Kerth
Joined: Apr 2003
Posts: 2,217 |
Yay!!!
"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
|
|
|
|
Joined: Apr 2003
Posts: 299
Hack from Nowheresville
|
|
Hack from Nowheresville
Joined: Apr 2003
Posts: 299 |
Vhat a interesting angle: Lois investigating Clark.
Waiting eagerly for more.
Gabriele
|
|
|
|
Joined: Apr 2003
Posts: 3,644
Pulitzer
|
|
Pulitzer
Joined: Apr 2003
Posts: 3,644 |
Oh, so you meant *that* kind of twins <g> With your fondness for multiple births, I was wondering...  I'm happy to see this sequel, and I'm even happy to hear it'll be short <g> Instant gratification, just the kind I like And this is a promising start, with Lois's instincts stirring. More, more! PJ
"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."
--Stardust, Caroline K
|
|
|
|
Joined: Apr 2003
Posts: 1,999
Merriwether
|
|
Merriwether
Joined: Apr 2003
Posts: 1,999 |
Interesting introduction.
More of a tease, really. But then that can be a good thing. Build up the excitement and the anticipation. Also it will mean the the gentle readers will be merciless in there haranging of Nan to provide MORE!
Tank (who realizes that he'll now have to scrap the entire story he was working on and go into permanent retirement)
|
|
|
|
Joined: Apr 2003
Posts: 2,380 Likes: 1
Kerth
|
|
Kerth
Joined: Apr 2003
Posts: 2,380 Likes: 1 |
No way, Tank. You're not allowed to retire. Even if the starting point was similar, any stories you and I write are bound to be different. And Pam, I do *not* have a thing for multiple births! It's only in that *one* story, which I will get to in due time to write the sequel. Nan
Earth is the insane asylum for the universe.
|
|
|
|
Joined: Jan 2004
Posts: 1,269
Top Banana
|
|
Top Banana
Joined: Jan 2004
Posts: 1,269 |
Intriguing start....
Lois is suspicious....that's ALWAYS fun!
Tank...write your story. We FOLCs will read as many as the writers write....we suffer from severe fanfic withdrawal when there are no new stories to read.
Looking forward to your next part, Nan!
Chris
"Together we are stronger than each of us is apart"
|
|
|
|
Joined: Apr 2003
Posts: 1,047
Top Banana
|
|
Top Banana
Joined: Apr 2003
Posts: 1,047 |
Yay, another Nan story!
Great start (no surprise!)..more soon please!
~Liz
Lois: Can I go?
Clark: No.
Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go.
Clark: Then why do you ask?
Lois: I’m trying to be nice.
|
|
|
|
Joined: Apr 2003
Posts: 2,992
Pulitzer
|
|
Pulitzer
Joined: Apr 2003
Posts: 2,992 |
Yay, another Nan story! Tricia 
|
|
|
|
