Wow, nice set up Nan.

Looking forward to reading this in the months to come.

James

Another Nan story! Oh goody!

I love your intro to this story. The A-plot is nicely in place, and I would love to see if/how Lois connects the dots. I can't wait for part 2. What's your posting schedule going to be like?

Okay, I promised myself to lurk only to reduce the time I spend on the boards. But I couldn't resist posting my comments given the title of this story.

*Tells myself firmly to resist posting comments and start lurking again*


metwin1

Due to a real busy RL, I had decended back into the realms of lurking. Nan, the title of your newest story is just too intriging. I *had* to pop up and comment. metwin1 is also typing a comment right now and by looks of it, she's going to post before I do. edit: she did.

Anyway, great story premise! I'm looking forward to more.

--meclone2-- *decends back to lurking*

Hi,

Great start.

Nan, I love Lois' inner-babbling! Excellent!
--Wanda

Great beginning. I can't wait to see where this might be leading.

Keep up the great work.

Yay! I just finished reading the first fic two days ago, so I'm excited the sequel's here. Lois' babbling was great.

JD

Yay!!!

Vhat a interesting angle: Lois investigating Clark.

Waiting eagerly for more.

Oh, so you meant *that* kind of twins <g> With your fondness for multiple births, I was wondering...

I'm happy to see this sequel, and I'm even happy to hear it'll be short <g> Instant gratification, just the kind I like

And this is a promising start, with Lois's instincts stirring. More, more!

PJ

Interesting introduction.

More of a tease, really. But then that can be a good thing. Build up the excitement and the anticipation. Also it will mean the the gentle readers will be merciless in there haranging of Nan to provide MORE!

Tank (who realizes that he'll now have to scrap the entire story he was working on and go into permanent retirement)

No way, Tank. You're not allowed to retire. Even if the starting point was similar, any stories you and I write are bound to be different.

And Pam, I do *not* have a thing for multiple births! It's only in that *one* story, which I will get to in due time to write the sequel.

Nan

Intriguing start....

Lois is suspicious....that's ALWAYS fun!

Tank...write your story. We FOLCs will read as many as the writers write....we suffer from severe fanfic withdrawal when there are no new stories to read.

Looking forward to your next part, Nan!

Yay, another Nan story!

Great start (no surprise!)..more soon please!

~Liz

Yay, another Nan story!

Tricia