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Yay, keep going! This is a great story!

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There was a long pause.

“Mom? Are you still there?”

“Clark, hold on a second. JOHNATHAN!!!”
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The good:

yay! part three! goofy



The bad:

Too short! Need more!


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Yup, too short, Mary! But otherwise this continues to be very entertaining and very well-written. Love your Martha!

Now - what is Clark going to do? I think he'd do some research on endometriosis, don't you? To find out just what it is, what it means and why Lois has been advised to get pregnant? I think he'd want to feel that he knew everything there was to know about her condition before he made any decision.

Waiting on part 4! wildguy wildguy


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A great part! smile1

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Nice talk! smile

short part!!! grumble

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Sounds like Clark has got a dilema. I love this story so far! and yeah your posts are short!

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Great work, Mary! I can't wait for the next part! thumbsup
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I can't wait until the part where Martha boxes Lois' ears! I don't usually advocate corporal punishment but S1 Lois makes my left foot itch...grrr! help

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Mary, this is such a great answer to the story challenge.

Just what is Clark going to do? hyper
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This is excellent, Mary!! thumbsup thumbsup

Write more soon!!
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