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FDK: All I Want for Christmas... #128319 11/22/03 06:45 AM
Joined: Aug 2003 Posts: 1,168 Toronto, Ontario, Canada Julie S OP Top Banana
OP Julie S Top Banana Joined: Aug 2003 Posts: 1,168 Toronto, Ontario, Canada	interesting... lol, but I wanted to know who that person was and what happaned! That shall remain mystery, I suppose. Julie Mulder: Imagine if you could come back and take out five people who had caused you to suffer. Who would they be? Scully: I only get five? Mulder: I remembered your birthday this year, didn't I, Scully? (The X-Files)

Re: FDK: All I Want for Christmas... #128320 11/22/03 11:30 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,761 Athina, Hellas A Anna B. the Greek Pulitzer
Anna B. the Greek Pulitzer A Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,761 Athina, Hellas	Interesting! AnnaBtG. What we've got here is failure to communicate...

Re: FDK: All I Want for Christmas... #128321 11/22/03 10:51 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 9,362 Scotland LabRat Boards Chief Administrator Emeritus Nobel Peace Prize Winner
LabRat Boards Chief Administrator Emeritus Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 9,362 Scotland	I still find this one a little bit confusing, Marnie, and think that perhaps expanding it or further developing the idea might work a little better. The idea is good - cute and as others have said, interesting - but, for me at least, the main point you wanted to get over - about our character being accidentally caught in some crossfire between Lois and Superman - isn't brought out clearly enough in this draft. I think it could be a really cute vignette though - the bones of it are certainly there already. LabRat Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly. Aramis: Yes, sorry. Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal. The Musketeers

Re: FDK: All I Want for Christmas... #128322 11/23/03 07:48 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 317 Canada Bumpkin Beat Reporter
Bumpkin Beat Reporter Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 317 Canada	I am glad that some found this interesting as it was, and I think that I have added some things to clarify it a bit more... I don't know, maybe the idea was just not fully formed. Marns ~pobody's nerfect

Re: FDK: All I Want for Christmas... #128323 11/23/03 03:33 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,791 9 hours from Metropolis Karen Merriwether
Karen Merriwether Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,791 9 hours from Metropolis	Wow! Okay, that makes a lot more sense. Poor guy, getting caught in the middle. It makes me wonder, though.. Why is a dentist helping Superman out? Does this thing happen often? Great story! "You need me. You wouldn't be much of a hero without a villain. And you do love being the hero, don't you. The cheering children, the swooning women, you love it so much, it's made you my most reliable accomplice." -- Lex Luthor to Superman, Question Authority, Justice League Unlimited

Re: FDK: All I Want for Christmas... #128324 12/02/03 05:07 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 454 The Netherlands Xanabee Beat Reporter
Xanabee Beat Reporter Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 454 The Netherlands	Quote she was very, very sorry that she had managed to hit him in the mouth with the roundhouse kick that had been aimed for the bad guy. ROTFL! Pity it wasn't Lex luthor, after all! I really enjoyed this, Bumpkin. It has the potential of growing into a nice short story. So how about it, hmm? Ursie Lois: Well, I like my quirks. I think they make me unique. Clark: You certainly are unique. Clark: You're high maintenance, you know that? Lois: But I'm worth it!

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