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Hi, Great start. More ASAP, please. MAF ![hyper hyper](/ubb/images/graemlins/default/hyper.gif)
Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF
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Hack from Nowheresville
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This is great! ![hyper hyper](/ubb/images/graemlins/default/hyper.gif) Ingra ![laugh laugh](/ubb/images/graemlins/default/laugh.gif)
Clark: What is that? Lois: It's my word. Clark: There is no such word. Lois: Sure there is. Someone's a chump, therefore, he's chumpy. Clark: Try again. Lois: Are you challenging me? Clark: You bet your sweet little chumpy I am.
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Oh, this is such a great start! I want more! JD ![hyper hyper](/ubb/images/graemlins/default/hyper.gif)
"Meg...who let you back in the house?" -Family Guy
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A very evil place to leave this!!!
I want her to read question #5.....NOW
Chris
"Together we are stronger than each of us is apart"
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This is gonna be good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I've converted to lurk-ism... hopefully only temporary.
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I've read the other stories in this series and I really enjoyed them. I can't wait to read the rest of this. GREAT start!
Melisa
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Caryn I'm glad to see you posting here. Tricia ![cool cool](/ubb/images/graemlins/default/cool.gif)
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Yay, you posted! ![smile smile](/ubb/images/graemlins/default/smile.gif) You already know I love this... Jimmy's thoughts -- especially his shock over the idea of Lois having a tattoo ![goofy goofy](/ubb/images/graemlins/default/goofysmile.gif) -- are great, and I just love the smiles L&C keep exchanging... Now if only Perry would go away so that Lois could focus on something *important* <g> PJ
"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed. He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement." "You can say that again," she told him. "I have a...." "Oh, shut up."
--Stardust, Caroline K
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I want to know where does Lois have the Tatoo!!! Jose ![smile1 smile1](/ubb/images/graemlins/default/1syellow1.gif)
"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
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Intruguing start! ![smile1 smile1](/ubb/images/graemlins/default/1syellow1.gif) Well written, funny and just...well, just darn good! Now, the only problem I see is... where's the next part?! When will it be up? Pelican ![smile smile](/ubb/images/graemlins/default/smile.gif)
Such a little thing really, a kiss...most people don't give it a moment's consideration. They kiss on meeting, they kiss on parting, that simple touching of flesh is taken entirely for granted as a basic human right.
Susan Kay
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Very cute story! Looking forward to the rest. Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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Thank you everyone for your responses. I'm glad you are all enjoying it. I had a lot of fun writing it. I noticed that everyone seemed to *really* like the tattoo part. ![wink wink](/ubb/images/graemlins/default/wink.gif) I know I left you hanging so I suppose <g> I could post the next part of the story because you all asked so nicely. Caryn
"With words one can escape reality..."
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