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Please don't take Henderson's powers away. I really like him super. And have a great trip to Hawaii. Enjoy your new grandson. gerry
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Oh yes, you have to let Bill keep the powers -- I like the idea of a Metropolis with three super-heros <g> And Sue went to all that trouble about dreaming up a costume, too. I confess, I'm curious about Sue meeting L&C, especially Lois... maybe they can have them over for dinner and Lois can give tips on the finer points of being married to a superman Or if that doesn't fit in your story (since there's only one more part), I'll just imagine it <g> Or, of course, I could just wait for the inevitable sequel PJ
"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed. He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement." "You can say that again," she told him. "I have a...." "Oh, shut up."
--Stardust, Caroline K
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Nan Another excellent part! I also hope that Henderson keeps his powers. Sue and his costume, LOL! Tricia
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Hi, Great part. More soon, please. MAF
Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF
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Wonderful part Nan! Have a great trip! Enjoy your family time! ~Liz
Lois: Can I go? Clark: No. Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go. Clark: Then why do you ask? Lois: I’m trying to be nice.
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things come in threes!(superheroes too)
booo............only 1 more part.
That must mean........there's a sequel
(It's ok, you can start writing it AFTER you come back from Hawaii...have a great time)
Chris
"Together we are stronger than each of us is apart"
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Good instalment, Nan.
It's been fun to see Henderson handle this life altering situation so matter of factly. His 'nothing seems to trouble him' nature sure came in handy.
I may be in the minority, but, while I find it fun to see Henderson (and Lois) becoming super for a time, I don't want to see it last forever. Part of the mystique of Superman is that he's a 'one of a kind' super hero. He's the original and like a xerox, it's never quite as good as the original.
Tank (who thinks that being super takes too much of the challenge out of Lois' life)
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Yay! One more part!! Is this going to be the start of a new series? have fun in Hawaii!!
"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
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Dang, only one more part...must mean there is a sequal in the works... Part of me agrees with Tank and part of me agrees with the rest, with regard to the permancy of the super-powers. Maybe you could wait several stories before they lose them... James
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Loved it, Nan! I can't believe you're ending it so soon; I want to see much more interaction between the three of them. You've shown us them interacting in their superhero guises, but I want to see them interacting as Lois, Clark and Bill now (and possibly Sue ) since Bill does know who they are. And, actually, I still want to see Lois and Clark dealing with the fact that Bill knows Superman's identity now. Only one more part?? Wendy
Just a fly-by! *waves*
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