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#1113 05/08/03 12:35 PM
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Anna, this was very sweet!

I can't say I understood every single word smile1


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Hi,

Cute story. smile1

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Good story Anna! smile

Your Spanish is certainly better than my English. :p

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Hey!! cute story! smile1 but I too would have killed Clark if he had told the whole world before ME!! but well the party and the making up sure would worth the tantrum!, lol.

Great spanish by the way! eek

Congratulations on your first story in spanish!.

See you and keep writting!
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So, Clark can be sneaky, eh? wink

It's a sweet story, and I want to encourage you to write more. smile

I do share the same reservations as the others, however, about Clark telling everyone else about the baby before Lois. Also, wouldn't she have been told the test results, rather than him? I think maybe the story would have worked better if Lois had been the one preparing to break the news to Clark.

Chris


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