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Yay! Awesome installment, Nan! I love that we're going to see 'Supercop' in action now. Great deductive reasoning on Bill's part, and I'm definitely looking forward to his next conversation with Superman.
More??
Irene
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Yeah, we have Super=man, now we have Super=Bill. Gotta love how discreet he is, having figured out that Lois was Ultra-Woman and Clark Superman.
Nice to see the dinner conversation Bill has with his wife.
Next....Bill tries flying?? Can't wait.
Chris
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Cool -
He's put all the pieces together..can't wait for Superman and UltraWoman to come home!
~Liz
Lois: Can I go?
Clark: No.
Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go.
Clark: Then why do you ask?
Lois: I’m trying to be nice.
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More! More! More! 
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Nan An excellent part!  I can't wait to see what happens when he meets Superman. Tricia 
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Good instalment even if it didn't have any Lois in it.
It's nice to see Bill found a nice brunette wife. Hopefully she won't care enough about that which doesn't directly involve her husband to put the pieces together like Bill did. It wouldn't be good for her to guess Supes', and Ultra's, secret.
It will be interesting to see what kind of furor will be caused by 'SuperSkimask'.
Tank (who hopes that the super duo get back soon, or else they might find themselves obsolete in Metropolis)
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We usually don't see the life of the supporting characters  Nicely done, Nan
"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
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hurray for henderson!
I can't wait to see the scene when he meets up with l&c.
More soon!
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Hi, Great part.
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
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Nan, when Bill started dressing in black, my brain started going "Yes! Yes! Yes!" I see "Supercop" is quite a literal title! I can't *wait* to see him in action.  Hazel, who quite likes Sue as well
Lois: You know the deal.
Clark: Superman gets the guys in capes, Lois and Clark get the guys in suits.
-- Action Comics 827
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Just an addendum from what I said on the ficlist... I really like Sue. You only had time for a quick backstory, but it rang true to the character and was really nice, to boot And I'm glad Bill's figured out the most important aspect of superpowers -- cleaning!  PJ
"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."
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Thanks, everybody. I'm having fun writing Henderson. For some reason it's really easy to get inside his head and make him real. Expect the next part when you see it -- probably in a week or so. Life around here is very chaotic at the moment, and I'm not always able to find the time I'd like to write, but I promise to do my best.  Nan
Earth is the insane asylum for the universe.
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nan, sorry i'm late to the party. don't have any specific comments offhand, but i did want to let you know that i've been reading this (one of the few stories i'm keeping up with these days). been really enjoying it. you've done a great job with henderson, and i especially like the way you handled the revelations. his developing control of the powers, too. still having problems, still afraid, but starting to get the hang of it. perfect. looking forward to the next part and the amazing adventures of super skier. or is that super "i'm not a burgler, really!" man? whatever the name, i'm definitely interested to see how people react to this new, mysterious, and oddly-dressed superhero. Paul
When in doubt, think about penguins. It probably won't help, but at least it'll be fun.
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YAY! We're really going to see SuperBill!! Wendy
Just a fly-by! *waves*
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