Yay! Awesome installment, Nan! I love that we're going to see 'Supercop' in action now. Great deductive reasoning on Bill's part, and I'm definitely looking forward to his next conversation with Superman.

More??

Irene

Yeah, we have Super=man, now we have Super=Bill. Gotta love how discreet he is, having figured out that Lois was Ultra-Woman and Clark Superman.

Nice to see the dinner conversation Bill has with his wife.

Next....Bill tries flying?? Can't wait.

Cool -

He's put all the pieces together..can't wait for Superman and UltraWoman to come home!

~Liz

More! More! More!

Nan

An excellent part!

I can't wait to see what happens when he meets Superman.

Tricia

Good instalment even if it didn't have any Lois in it.

It's nice to see Bill found a nice brunette wife. Hopefully she won't care enough about that which doesn't directly involve her husband to put the pieces together like Bill did. It wouldn't be good for her to guess Supes', and Ultra's, secret.

It will be interesting to see what kind of furor will be caused by 'SuperSkimask'.

Tank (who hopes that the super duo get back soon, or else they might find themselves obsolete in Metropolis)

We usually don't see the life of the supporting characters

Nicely done, Nan

hurray for henderson!

I can't wait to see the scene when he meets up with l&c.

More soon!

Hi,

Great part.

Nan, when Bill started dressing in black, my brain started going "Yes! Yes! Yes!"

I see "Supercop" is quite a literal title! I can't *wait* to see him in action.

Hazel, who quite likes Sue as well

Just an addendum from what I said on the ficlist... I really like Sue. You only had time for a quick backstory, but it rang true to the character and was really nice, to boot

And I'm glad Bill's figured out the most important aspect of superpowers -- cleaning!

PJ

Thanks, everybody.

I'm having fun writing Henderson. For some reason it's really easy to get inside his head and make him real.

Expect the next part when you see it -- probably in a week or so. Life around here is very chaotic at the moment, and I'm not always able to find the time I'd like to write, but I promise to do my best.

Nan

nan, sorry i'm late to the party. don't have any specific comments offhand, but i did want to let you know that i've been reading this (one of the few stories i'm keeping up with these days). been really enjoying it. you've done a great job with henderson, and i especially like the way you handled the revelations. his developing control of the powers, too. still having problems, still afraid, but starting to get the hang of it. perfect.

looking forward to the next part and the amazing adventures of super skier. or is that super "i'm not a burgler, really!" man? whatever the name, i'm definitely interested to see how people react to this new, mysterious, and oddly-dressed superhero.

Paul

YAY! We're really going to see SuperBill!!


Wendy