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FDK: Finish 1/1 #10004 01/22/04 08:53 AM
Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 370 J Julia OP Beat Reporter
OP Julia Beat Reporter J Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 370	Wow, my first time that I go first with the comments Great little story You set a very oppressing mood here. It all seemed so final, but I guess we can always count on our hero to save the day, can't we? Keep 'em coming your little vignettes with the unpredictable endings I like so much. Julia

Re: FDK: Finish 1/1 #10005 01/22/04 12:51 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. Pulitzer
mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Sweet story. Love it. MAF Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: FDK: Finish 1/1 #10006 01/23/04 02:16 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast daneel Kerth
daneel Kerth Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast	Wonderful! Jose "Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot

Re: FDK: Finish 1/1 #10007 01/23/04 05:16 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY Laurach Pulitzer
Laurach Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY	Wow she just got up and started dusting! lOL Well I would think she'd be a little more joyous then that but the story was pretty good anyway. Laura Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?” Caroline's "Stardust"

Re: FDK: Finish 1/1 #10008 01/23/04 09:02 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,761 Athina, Hellas A Anna B. the Greek Pulitzer
Anna B. the Greek Pulitzer A Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,761 Athina, Hellas	That was nice! I like how Clark is the one to save the world Also liked the opening scene. Very beautiful. Keep writing. See ya, AnnaBtG. What we've got here is failure to communicate...

Re: FDK: Finish 1/1 #10009 01/23/04 09:25 AM
Joined: Jan 2004 Posts: 8 L lucyolsen Blogger
lucyolsen Blogger L Joined: Jan 2004 Posts: 8	Martha just goes to do the dusting because she was at peace with the idea of dying. Sure, she'd rather be alive, but they had resigned themselves to the idea and were calm and collected about it. Quote Originally posted by Anna B. the Greek: That was nice! I like how Clark is the one to save the world Um, isn't he always? lucyolsen

Re: FDK: Finish 1/1 #10010 01/23/04 12:22 PM
Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 34 spazzqueen251 Blogger
spazzqueen251 Blogger Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 34	That was great. I like the tone you set and Martha's thoughts about not wanting her son to be okay if everyone else were to die. It was very thought provoking. ~Lauren Clark: Lois, you're kinda babbling. Lois: I know. See, I never babble. Clark: Are you kidding? You're a brook.

Re: FDK: Finish 1/1 #10011 01/23/04 06:59 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,627 Gulf Shores, AL Shadow Pulitzer
Shadow Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,627 Gulf Shores, AL	Great job. Quote At last, he realized why everyone had gathered. They didn’t want to pray, or make their peace with God. They just didn’t want to die alone. Those lines were really powerful for me, in particular. Jen "Meg...who let you back in the house?" -Family Guy

Re: FDK: Finish 1/1 #10012 01/25/04 05:42 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 767 usa merry Features Writer
merry Features Writer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 767 usa	Lucy nice story merry

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