Wow--really loving this story! And really curious as to where Clark is? (I'm guessing it's a time zone issue--but...yeah, I can see some sort of emergency coming up and Clark needing to help in some way, too. Hmmmm......)
She ventured up, into his face, and saw her own dazed wonderment and awed disbelief reflected in his eyes.
Beautiful sentence
He hadn't assumed that the best dance of her life automatically earned him her trust.
Liked this line a lot, too...yes--best dance of her life!
"OK. Thanks." She slipped her arms into the sleeves. His warmth caressed her. His cologne wafted into her nostrils. And the memory of his arm around her tingled across her skin.
Loved the description of how wearing Clark's coat felt for Lois. Very intimate...
What if exhaustion had paralysed her jerk-radar?
'jerk-radar'
Beautiful writing-wonderful story!
Laura
