Laura: Thank you for the comments!
Great job! I did get a chuckle out of the ending (and then went back and reread it with new perspective
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Chip reemerges! Good idea to pull someone somewhat familiar into your story
I will admit that this was my (and maybe Perry's??) way of getting back at Chip Peterson from BaTP. I never liked that guy.
Awesome twist at the end!
Thanks!
Knowing Lois, I'm sure she does
That's what I figured! I always wondered how Lois managed to not simply *live* at the precinct with the number of murderers, kidnappers, mob leaders, etc she managed to entangle herself with on a daily basis… :rolleyes:
