GAH!!!
Crapola, that was bad! Of course, I knew he was gonna have to tell her at some point, but yeesh... that went really bad. And he didn't even get to tell her that he was an alien or anything! So he didn't tell her the whole truth still... maybe he'll realize his lunkheaded move and return? /checks the author name/ Oh, right.
Now I absolutely can't wait to read the next installment. How is he planning on going back to America? He hasn't rediscovered any powers yet, that we know of. Is he just planning on wandering around miserably for the rest of his time until they come back?
Oh, and I liked the realization that Lois was "THE Lois Lane" too.
Great moment. I can see why Lois is all paranoid, but she had her part in this too. For some reason I thought we were going to have a bit more of a slow reveal, but nope! Well done!
Uh-oh. I just had a suddenly dark thought. What if (yuck and gasp) Tempus was really the father of Lana's baby??
(Okay, now I'm done.
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