Corrina,
Even though Jimmy has apparently been training the Bangala in the art of the interruption, I have thoroughly enjoyed every part of this story. Also, the quick turnaround time between parts 15 and 16 means that your readers will quickly forgive your Valentine's Day cliffhanger.
I'm still hoping that Lois will reveal the nature of her marriage sooner than later, but, regardless, she and Clark will need time to build their relationship. They both have secrets left to share, so building trust will be crucial. Looking forward to part 16!
PS--I'm perfectly fine if they never find a shirt for Clark.
