Good morning!
Iolan - Thank you! I squirm at long, drawn-out revelations myself. Maybe it's because I hate confrontations.
Mozart - In the original I had Lois very calm and cool instead of flirtatious. It should have been a signal to Clark that something was up, but he was a little preoccupied at the time.
I'm glad you liked the story - thanks!
Michael - Ah, there you are! I've been looking forward to reading over your shoulder!
Right. Title. Another thing I need to think about.
I got lucky and Virginia suggested a perfect title. Feel free to use it.
They chose her using cup-size as selection criteria?
Bwaaa! It's a darn good thing I wasn't drinking anything at the time.
Bad Clark. Using x-ray vision like that.
Heh. If he had, I'm sure he would have reflected on it at length in his version.
So, time to make love, then?
Sure. And the first thing they'll take off is Linda's lipstick.
Let’s do it again, soon /sets up camp on dark side/
If you knew what lay in store, you'd give up camping and just move in.
Thanks to everyone who's commented. It is very greatly appreciated!
