What a great story based off one of my favorite episodes--can't wait to read the whole thing!
Had to laugh--even though it was sad, too--at her thinking that her fish wouldn't be buying her chocolates on Valentine's Day.
I love the comparison between Clark and Claude and the description given for Clark. Also, the paragraph explaining her life-view, including that best friends will turn into bitter enemies--is just heartbreaking.
What a great conversation between Lois and Superman. I felt bad for Clark there, trapped between not saying enough and saying too much. I love that he encouraged Lois to be honest with Clark (himself) even if that did mean she would tell him she only wanted to be friends. Very selfless, thinking of her first.
And the line about wanting to be Clark's everything but not wanting him to be hers--chills ran through me.
So glad she's going to go see Clark! Hope he'll be there by the time she gets to his place.
