More FDK!
Deadly Chakram: Thanks for the indepth comments!
Well that's different!... Dream?
Yep, in this story large passages in
italics are dreams or things written down (usually also dreams).
Well, there's a new attitude from Lois!
Ah, poor Lois is suffering from the unrequited love that she developed for Clark before walking down the aisle to Luthor.
For a professional wordsmith, she sure isn't all that good with words sometimes.
For a wordsmith, she has no courage to say to her crush what she actually feels. (Been there, it sucks. See comments on your story - same guy.)
Oooh! Bad Jimmy! I approve!
<Bangs on Clark's head like it's a malfunctioning piece of machinery>
Good thing he's invulnerable.
Clark took a deep breath. “Lois, I’m…”
“Superman?” She was starting to sound like a broken record and decided to try a different tactic instead.
I LOVE this.
How to give the Man of Steel a dent.
Oh Clark! <locks him away in a bouncy castle for a while until he can think straight>
You might have remembered me saying somewhere (on the WAFFy thread) that Clark was a big lunkhead in this story. :rolleyes:
Fantastic! No groaning or eye rolling here. Just a lot of laughing out loud! Can't wait to read more!
Whew! I'll take
over :rolleyes: , anyday. Glad you likes. Thank you.
