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” Okay. Now, this is the third time I've read this part and it already sounds better, clearer than the previous two versions”
Hopefully third time's the charm.
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“Did canon Lois officially take Clark's last name?”
I don't think that was really discussed in detail but if she had hyphenated it she could legitimately continue to used Lois Lane.
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"HOW did Lois get Clark's powers!?! Is this another aura bounce? So, not only telepathy, but also heat vision and speed! Is she UW again?! This is NEW!"
You’ll just have to read the rest to find out.
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“Love the necklace BTW. Is that your design?”
No, I found it on e-bay and saved the picture. I am hosting the picture on my site because it disappeared from e-bay.
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“So do the kids know that Mom and Dad are each two people (or 3! no, 4! for Clark)? Or since they are old enough they've been let in on the secret? We're the kids at CJ's wedding?”
This story is more or less exclusively about this one incident, but in other volumes that is explained.
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“This version is more clear, but it ruins to whole surprise / mystery that young Lois and older Lois are the same person! I love that from the earlier version. It's good to keep the reader guessing. I would take out Lois's & Clark's thoughts / telepathic messages, so that surprise for the reader is still there and the scene remains fully in Wells POV. But maybe that's just me. ”
That was a mistake on my part and I have corrected it.
