Mind that you posted early? Missy, are you kidding? This was great!
A terrific part too! I loved the way that the Harrington/Rourke case got tied up so neatly - and you even kept Lois on safe legal ground. Nicely done!
And then the whole bit in Lois' apartment...a very nice scene with Lois realizing that Kal needs someone to talk to after an emotional outing as the superhero...wonderful kisses before they both wake up and realize what they're doing. I like how you're twisting everything around and having Lois suddenly now start to realize her attraction towards Kal, even though she's undeniably in love with Clark. Very confusing for her. And the sparks are going to fly...
Eagerly waiting for more...
Kathy
