Aaawww... Cute! I think Shadow's already stolen my heart... blush

Very interesting developments! I love how descriptive you were with this section, particularly at MCB. There's a lot of things people don't think about that you put into detail with this. It was very well done.

Lois' mind jumping to children was quite funny. That seemed to blindside Clark for a while. (oops, blush sorry. no pun intended)

I really liked the reaction of the bullpen to Clark's return. Very realistic and somehow sweet (with Jimmy and all).

And Perry knows! clap clap I wonder what will happen next. Will Perry come straight out with it? Methinks not, given he knew before, but I kind of hope he does. Can't wait!
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