The previous chapters were great! But this one is incredible. I will be away from my computer for a few days, so checking my cell phone will keep me in touch with all the action.

Looking over Lois' shoulder to watch all the action is an excellent way to keep the reader involved. However, the letter and his physical demeanor are the only windows allowing us to know what's going on inside Clark's mind and heart.

Come on Ms. Lane, use those great intuitive leaps of yours to get to the truth!

These cliffhangers are killing me!!!

Morgana

A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.