I love the premise for this story! You know, it really is remarkable that half of Metropolis (Lois included) didn't stake out Clark's apartment after he announced to the world that he does Superman's laundry.

I like the mention of Mazik's too. Are we about to launch into the kidnapping of the Kents?

I wonder if Lois is going to finally put CK and S together in her mind. Maybe start playing with the website again and place designer sunglasses on the picture of Superman and have the little light bulb turn on.

One little quibble though - if Lois left the windows of the Jeep rolled down so that someone could steal the "gift" of garbage, they probably would have stolen the entire vehicle. I know it doesn't always happen, but Lois *does* have a nice Jeep. laugh

Can't wait for more!


Battle On,
Deadly Chakram

"Being with you is stronger than me alone." ~ Clark Kent

"One little spark of inspiration is at the heart of all creation." ~ Figment the Dragon