This is great! I also loved the thoughts going through Lois's mind while looking at herself in the mirror before her and Lex's wedding.
You've really captured the differences between her relationships with the three main men in her life.
I hope you include music in the hearing sense... like when Lois & Clark dance for the first time. I was wondering why you didn't use that 'touch' here. Or that first kiss, but now I'm guessing you're saving those for other senses. Taste, perhaps?
